True Love


The Untamed Ink

True Love

By The Untamed Ink

Wed 01 Mar, 2017 16:43:24 EAT
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#nature  #love  #blindness  


True Love

I have walked through storm and placid,
Through sun and rain,
To find the equation of true love
Without success,
I stand here pondering,
Wondering if any victim may know

She walks on me,
And take a profound look into my eyes
She mumbles at last,
Love is beautiful,
It's comparable to blossoming roses,
Or drizzling drops in the sun's vicinity
My psyche rebels,
'Cause I know flowers wither with time,
And the drops surmount the sun.
That's not true love

He descries her charms as the true love,
As the solved equation of it.
She unpretentiously goes astray,
Opening her heart wide to his looks,
And size of his trousers' pocket.
They pledge to die out in eternity,
But single out in soonish,
Because their looks fade away with days,
And his pocket size diminishes unnotably.
That's not true love

I stand on the bank and see the river flow,
It flows down the valley without haste,
But still overcomes the stumbling blocks on its way.
I cast my eyes in the north and see a mountain,
Standing sturdily and firmly,
Not swayed by the stormy currents,
Nor moved by the raging quakes,
It overlives the parching sun rays.
That's what I equate to true love,
Patience and perseverance.

ęchris

By The Untamed Ink
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  • Eunny
    I love the way you've painted how its hard to find true love. Bingo.
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Eunny, its actually very difficult to come by true love
    155 wk ago
  • William
    BINGO
    155 wk ago
  • Adala Simon
    Hahahaa kaka poetry ngumu BT I thnk it s about love cool
    155 wk ago
  • Willis Ochieng
    Top notch creativity.Thumbs up bro!...I never saw it coming.
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks guys
    155 wk ago
  • Ochimercie
    Thumbs up Chris...I like the way you've put it.It's rare to find true love nowadays and actually many people are always after money
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    some are blinded by external looks
    155 wk ago
  • Kibet
    Wewee...nice bro.
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks Kechi, umeshtuka lakini sijui mbona
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks Kechi, umeshtuka lakini sijui mbona
    155 wk ago
  • Dianne
    Uko sawa my d.a
    155 wk ago
  • Dianne
    huh?I just loved it uko sawa my d.a
    155 wk ago
  • Soo
    This is awesome pal....
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Lorna, I see you have turned up. any criticism ?
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks Diane
    155 wk ago
  • Zachary Mbara
    big up *chris* nice poem, love such
    154 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks Mbara, I see you have paid a visit today
    154 wk ago
  • Victor
    good work bro, big up, you are an orator in the making, i love this peace!
    154 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks vic
    154 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks vic
    154 wk ago
  • James Muoki
    chris soar higher bro .doing it perfectly
    154 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks James
    154 wk ago

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