The Missing Star


The Untamed Ink

The Missing Star

By The Untamed Ink

Wed 08 Mar, 2017 09:32:52 EAT
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#love  #hope  #desperation  


The Missing Star

Down to earth I lie,
As my eyes gaze up the sky,
Searching for the star not to die,
In which I scribbled your name,
'Cause you made me believe the fame,
That the star typifies the game.

Its one of my darkest days you know,
'Cause the star is nowhere to show,
As it's light I know is a missing bow.
I can neither see the moon,
Nor the cast of the sun beyond noon,
You took them all for your boon.

I now see how untrue I was,
As this fright grows worse,
Falling in love with you at once,
Without the awareness or hint,
Of how this love would make me tint,
And hold on to you for this stint.

Yes, I didn't know it,
Though I could feel the beat,
Of love that always brought the sleet.
Your proximity made me crazy,
With my head a little bit hazy,
Its why I hang on the love though its heavy.

Feeling low here I pray,
For you to stop the play,
And come back to me like a ray,
'Cause my heart yearns for your vicinity,
So that we keep this trinity,
Me, you and the Almighty.


©chris

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  • Soo
    Wow! Great piece pal.
    368 wk ago
  • Eunny
    The rhyme, amazing.
    368 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Eunny and Lorna
    368 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Eunny and Lorna
    368 wk ago
  • Mwandah
    I love it....rhyme scheme mwaaah
    368 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Faith
    368 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks Faith
    368 wk ago
  • Noelle
    Dope rhyme scheme!! Niiice piece
    368 wk ago
  • Kechi
    This is a master piece man with the rhyme scheme.i salute you you've perfected the piece
    368 wk ago
  • Ruthsellah
    A very awesome read Chris.
    368 wk ago
  • Chris
    Thanks guys
    368 wk ago
  • Adala Simon
    Ty .kali
    368 wk ago

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