She Asked For Me

The Untamed Ink

She Asked For Me

By The Untamed Ink

Thu 23 Feb, 2017 12:05:40 EAT
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#loneliness  #depression  #love  

She Asked For Me

She asked for my avocation,
I told her it's walking in the rain,
For the drops and ripples to carry away the tears,
My tears that consistently shed.

She asked of my seclusion,
I told her it's my lone companion,
That helps me handle the distress,
Without inflicting on those who care.

She asked of my wary,
I told her it's the only tool I own,
To protect my heart from the break,
And keep it for the owner to come.

She asked of my smile amidst tears,
I told her it's the solo trap I have,
To hide my claws from the eyes,
And ensnare the prey on the way.

She asked of my love,
I told her I never knew what it meant,
'Cause she blindfolded me not to see,
Before she left me in the wild.

She asked for my hand,
I gave it to her with a heart,
Believing she was my heaven sent,
To lead me through the dark and solitary planet.


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  • Kibet
    Nice piece of art bro..Information nice there.
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    thanks bro, criticism is allowed too
    155 wk ago
  • Kechi
    This piece is great I love how you've used the words to an extend the persona gave in to her from the first line though you've hidden it
    155 wk ago
  • Chris
    exactly, bro, thanks
    155 wk ago
  • Adalasimon
    NYC concept kaka haya mapenzi kweli yatatumaliza
    155 wk ago
  • Dianne
    Mapenzi kizunguzungu writing napenda sana ubunifu wako keep on writing.
    155 wk ago

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