Pseudo Paradise

by Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago 👁 904 views ❤ 83
She never saw good in me,
After the best gifts I gave to her ... My time ...
A gift once given you can't get it back ... expensive it is right ?
All she could do is to flee away and say "I never loved you Rick "
What about the promises when we were head over heels for each other ???
"Promises are meant to be broken just like laws are ... " those were the replies

She was the reason I disagreed with mama,
She left me in an imperiled situation with mama,
Rejection started both from her people and my people ... especially from her people
I became an outcast,
All because of her,

Mama am sorry ,
Am sorry mama,
I never listened to you 'coz I thought u didn't want to see me blossom in love ,
I thought she would walk with me in Paradise which was just a pseudo,
Indeed mama I have realized you were always infallible because of my wife's inane,
You once said that she's incorrigible,
I always argued: just for Barn's sake,
Now i wonder Were you having a back eye mama...

Now she has left me in an inconsolable situation and my heart is now in pieces,
No doctor is specialized in my disease,
Everything has come to still for she impeded me because of her imbecile moron,
Though the message of part was incredulous to me,
When I remembered those reminiscent smiles ,
When I used to think I was the best in all men,
But indeed stupid I was ,
But maybe we were never meant to be together ,
Maybe ... Who knows
K
I writes poetry based on life experiences,what happens during day to day life and how life generally is.

Comments (18)

  • Kechi 9 years ago
    The poem is splendid bro
  • Jeymoh Spotter 9 years ago
    Wow! great work Mr. Kechi the Poet,,,more of advice,,,,,,
  • Martin 9 years ago
    never disappointing in your art bro always keep it up
  • Kibe 9 years ago
    keep it up
  • Rapando Jnr 9 years ago
    I like the expression from the persona. Listen to <b>Mama</b> when she tells you
  • Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago
    Thanks all am humbled
  • Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago
    #Jaymoh its Kenyatta junior & not Kech the poet
  • Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago
    #Jaymoh its Kenyatta junior & not Kech the poet
  • Moses 9 years ago
    As per the norm - It's quite a piece- Congrats!
  • Fat-huddin Ali Mzee 9 years ago
    Keep it up bro
  • NM 9 years ago
    Nice piece....keep it up
  • Kenyatta 9 years ago
    thanks #mandela & fathu for ur time
  • Nannah 9 years ago
    Good work junior.....there z some nice moral lesson over there
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    very nice keep it up.
  • Lil Monster 9 years ago
    Awesome piece i just fell inlove with it
  • Dopeboy 9 years ago
    Great work keep the spirit
  • Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago
    thanks all for your time...
  • Fat-huddina Ali Mzee 9 years ago
    Bro keep it up moral kwa wngi and we wll support u tht ur talent