Nimecatch Mafeellings

by Nkoy 9 years ago 👁 992 views ❤ 92
Nimecatch mafeelings...
Sioni nikiziwachilia hivi karibuni...
Uchungu moyoni...
Najaribu,
Lakini siwezi jizuia machozi kunitoka,
Rafiki yangu kanicheza...

I am bitter,
I can not believe it happened to me...
She was always there,
She was supposed to be my best friend,
I shared a lot with her,
I told her a lot about my lover... She was intrigued with our stories
she wanted to hear more,
The likes and dislikes,
What makes him smile,
His fave songs,
Best colour,
... Name them...

I told it all
The suddenly she starts keeping silent...
She no longer wants to spend time...
Shouting at me saying all I talk about is my Boyfriend...
But she was the one asking about him***
I knew she was finding a way of not being my friend... But did not know why....

'Hun, I think we should part ways... You deserve someone better and am not that someone'
He called and said
Even before I could ask of the promises we made
The good times we shared
The cries, smiles, and laughs...
He hung up on me...

So here I am all alone
Crying my eyes off
For I just saw my former lover
with her...
Acting all loving
Rubbing it all to my face...

Heri ingekuwa nimepigwa fimbo kwa mwili...
Sababu ntajikanda na maji moto...
Maumivu ya penzi,
Hakuna upasuaji...

... Shouting
... Screaming
... Remembering how I had plot my own downfall unknowingly...
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I am a medical student I love poetry... A social person

Comments (46)

  • Lydia 9 years ago
    Wooow, that's touchy.. Good work swee
  • Lydia 9 years ago
    Wooow, that's touchy.. Good work swee
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Yeah Lysh... Thanks alot
  • Kibwana 9 years ago
    Wow...this is one of the best, I hope you learnt the lesson of kuachwa the hard way ...tihihi
  • Marc 9 years ago
    nice one pal.I really like it
  • Marc 9 years ago
    nice one pal.I really like it
  • Nzioki 9 years ago
    wow the great 1 4 the "shukshas"...keep on beb... ukoyuuuuuu ...
  • Nzioki 9 years ago
    wow the great 1 4 the "shukshas"...keep on beb... ukoyuuuuuu ...
  • Rmurwa 9 years ago
    Good...very...keep them coming
  • Pauline Chore 9 years ago
    Woow nice one,,,,, lakini umecheswa......haahaa.
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks #Kibwana this one was from the heart...<br />Pauline hehehe... Nilicheswa fisuri...<br />
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Murwa asante sana... Will keep them coming... You can also temm me what you want me to write about
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Marc thanks alooot... Nzioki asante sana... Yeah it can relate with the 'shukishas'
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Marc thanks alooot... Nzioki asante sana... Yeah it can relate with the 'shukishas'
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Marc thanks alooot... Nzioki asante sana... Yeah it can relate with the 'shukishas'
  • Betsy Makokha 9 years ago
    Nice work siz..you have a talent in poetry...
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks siz... Bit by bit to perfection
  • Miriam Boke 9 years ago
    Ts so hurting ...congrats lave
  • Alice Achieng 9 years ago
    that's some piece lave ,keep up da talent u'll sure go places
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    The piece is superb.i love the approach .I haven't seen that style for long now it's just awesome .I love it
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks #Alice and #Boke Am humbled<br />yeah the story is hurting...<br />
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Asante Kechi...
  • Rachael Mutimba 9 years ago
    Nice work Laveh.<br />
  • Lina 9 years ago
    wow....nice piece swry... poetry is indeed in u ...keep them coming..
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks Rachell... I see you...<br />#Lina I will keep them coming always... Just promise to stick around
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks Rachell... I see you...<br />#Lina I will keep them coming always... Just promise to stick around
  • Soreen 9 years ago
    nice nekoye...
  • Blessings 9 years ago
    As always... You've blown my mind...but shit is so real
  • Blessings 9 years ago
    As always... You've blown my mind...but shit is so real
  • SirFredJala 9 years ago
    Lav, that is awesome. That is how the current exemplary poets began so keep it up. We want to see you on top one of this fine days. I believe that's your creativity but nothing like that happened to you, right!!?
  • SirFredJala 9 years ago
    Lav, that is awesome. That is how the current exemplary poets began so keep it up. We want to see you on top one of this fine days. I believe that's your creativity but nothing like that happened to you, right!!?
  • SirFredJala 9 years ago
    Lav, that is awesome. That is how the current exemplary poets began so keep it up. We want to see you on top one of this fine days. I believe that's your creativity but nothing like that happened to you, right!!?
  • SirFredJala 9 years ago
    Lav, that is awesome. That is how the current exemplary poets began so keep it up. We want to see you on top one of this fine days. I believe that's your creativity but nothing like that happened to you, right!!?
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    #Fred... Thanks alot<br />#Sorren am with you<br />#Blessings... Yeah so realll
  • Livingstone Lucky 9 years ago
    hehe kumbe umeiva poem ivo,,lav it
  • Sheila Habwe 9 years ago
    No words to describe this! you have come so far dear,am proud of you, keep this up, I always knew talanta unayo. Thumbs high or maybe pat on your shoulder. But don't rest, rest is for the wicked.
  • Situma Dan 9 years ago
    wonderful piece. I love it.
  • Janet Atieno 9 years ago
    I really love it.. Big up swee....... Na ile talent ya kuimba pia bdo nakumbuka tukiwa primo napenda tena sana
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Asante sana #Dan <br />#Janet... Talent siwezi wacha... Bado naimba
  • Maggie 9 years ago
    sweerie u soo down but always count on me,,,this poem though,, soo sweet but bitter,, I miss you gal,,u got a talent<br />
  • Gideon 9 years ago
    This is what I call talent. Use something trending to make something out of it#love the poem. Looking forward for a video. Or rather should I came do a video for you...
  • Rapando Jnr 9 years ago
    One thing that caught my eye was the use of two styles. Nice plot too Nkoy
  • Kenyatta Junior 9 years ago
    I love the piece nkoy ... u have given me a challenge ill have to try these nxt tym otherwise i felt it bravo !!!
  • Cynthy Charlotte 9 years ago
    I love this....soo awesome
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Thanks Cynthy
  • Jeymoh Spotter 9 years ago
    Another great found,,,now leave Alexander the great,,, Nkoy u great,,,keep it up