Night Of Our Dance


Creative Hadassah

Night Of Our Dance

By Creative Hadassah

Tue 09 Oct, 2018 20:13:24 EAT
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Night Of Our Dance

'Tis a memory we embrace dearly
My all time throwback I'd say
The first night
Only Friday night worth laying awake for
The one night my shyness was stripped off
My curves were moulded into perfect womanhood
Your magical hands carving and baking.

Bodies swayed to the blazing music
Excitement kissed rhythm and tempo alike
Sweat and alcohol stung in unison
This night would never end
Dawn was a million miles away
It was a hundred years off the hook.

You asked whether you were too fast
I clung on your shoulder for more
You wanted to know whether my limbs were faint
I threw my head back and laughed
How could I ever resist your arms?
Why would I ever want to?

I still harbour the secret smile that pinched your lips
The perfect uncoordinated moves too
Yes it was our only night
Even though I might never see you again
I still suffocate in your scent so male
The dance was worth the night out.
©Hadassah

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  • Anonymus
    A good piece here . I pray you do more .
    18 wk ago
  • Truphena
    Very good and interesting indeed... good creativity
    18 wk ago
  • Anonymus
    lovly indeed.. great job here
    18 wk ago
  • Qzadil
    Great piece of work....i love it
    18 wk ago
  • Me
    Nice piece,,keep it up
    18 wk ago
  • Anonymus
    Not bad
    18 wk ago
  • Yaola
    Awesome piece Hadassah, keep up
    18 wk ago
  • Tsisika
    Damn baby girl this is soo nice..keep up the good work in your poetry
    18 wk ago
  • VIP
    Perfect piece
    18 wk ago
  • Collo
    The last stanza blew me away, I like the poem
    18 wk ago
  • Hendricks
    nice one hadassah queen
    18 wk ago
  • Morin
    Really creative..keep going gal
    18 wk ago
  • Morin
    Really creative..keep going gal
    18 wk ago
  • Madaphine
    Great work babygal,, keep it up
    18 wk ago
  • Patrobas
    This is poetic perfection in making. I love it
    18 wk ago
  • Levin Makuba
    Lovely......l like it
    18 wk ago
  • Dennis Waswaz
    That's great my lovely siz keep up at least am motivated and very soon am joining you....👏👏
    18 wk ago
  • Hadassah
    Thank you sweethearts.. you're my poetic fuel.Lots of Love
    18 wk ago
  • Snow
    Nice piece..keep it up
    18 wk ago
  • Dennis Waswaz
    That's great my d.a siz keep up we r by ur side...we must do away with mires and Margus of academic opugunancy that indeed results to obnoxious behaviors during examinations@waswazdennis.
    18 wk ago
  • Collins
    Its worth two thumbs
    18 wk ago
  • Kelvin
    This is a masterpiece!No I pray that you might see him again.Make sure I read about it.
    18 wk ago
  • Veril
    Awesome...... you're going places with such professional arts. It's amazing and hoping to read more of this kind. Wish you all the best dear 👍👍
    18 wk ago
  • TEMESI GODFREY
    So powerful..need more in my email.
    18 wk ago
  • Mudasiah
    lovely piece there thirsty for more.
    18 wk ago
  • Dennis Muli
    Great poem. I can surely relate 😆😆😆
    16 wk ago
  • Elvis
    I love it..thumbs up
    16 wk ago
  • Judith Bwakali
    good one, keep it up
    14 wk ago

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