My Brother's Wife

by Rapando 9 years ago 👁 6,385 views ❤ 97
I have a brother, same blood, same lineage,
He has a wife, I have mine,
His Sue, mine Jane, and they are friends.
I have daughters, he has sons,
A pretty good family, right?

Sue, my brother's wife,
When she came and stayed four seasons without yield,
My mother was on her neck,
Demanding offspring, yet it was my brother's fault,
I knew it, he knows it too, no one else knows,
It was an accident in our teenage hood,
He knew his marriage was at risk, and came for brotherly help,
He needed me to sire.

Now, Sue, my brother's wife,
She didn't know the plan, but she had hers too,
She is as fertile as the banks of the Nile,
Yet it seems she already knew my brother's seeds had no hope of seeing the sun,
So she started greeting me longer during my farm visits,
She'd come to borrow a spade when Jane wasn't around,
And she'd laugh so hard at every joke I dropped that I could see more than her ribs move,
Sometimes she'd come with food and watch me eat,
Her eyes spying on every swallow, her gaze searching my eyes.
She would walk with grace as she bid bye so I would look at her disappearing figure,
Swaying in the evening breeze, literally beckoning me to her.

Wait, she is my sister,
Not by law, but in law,
But hey!
She has her ways of trapping a man,
At first I thought my brother fell into a trap of her beauty,
But hey, she had more to offer,
She knew what to do to tie his legs and make him abandon his quests,
She needed a child as much as my brother,
And though they kept it secret, they had one quest,
The child would come from the family.

So I fell for it, not only for her, but for my brother too,
And sons came in a row,
My mother was happy,
Sue glowed, my brother gloated with pride.
Each looked like me, and I knew one day questions would be raised,
But hey, I am a copy of my father's,
And questions would be answered by his picture.

Now Sue is pregnant, again,
I know it is not mine, unless it stalled for a couple years,
But it isn't mine,
I was happy at first, that my brother was healed perhaps,
And his seeds would see the sun as mine do,
But he came the other day, patted me on my back and said,
'Thank you brother, but three sons is enough trouble already',
Now my mouth is shut for the sake of my brother's joy and pride,
But I need a talk with Sue.
R
A poet by passion.

Comments (32)

  • tis Nguitui 9 years ago
    Awsome story. Very captivating.
  • Victor 9 years ago
    insightful<br />
  • James Mwangi 9 years ago
    Awesomely interesting with an amazing content of this poem...<br />Big up bro$$$$$$$<br />©
  • Sumee 9 years ago
    Wow Sam i love this piece
  • Yvonne 9 years ago
    Captivating piece
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    Wooooow, this is awesome i love this one
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    Wooooow, this is awesome i love this one
  • SaintValz 9 years ago
    Hahahaha this is crazy though, i can just imagine the situation
  • Poet Nyque 9 years ago
    This why I call you MENTOR
  • Austine 9 years ago
    Haha kali......chora ingine ya kuendeleza
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Nice bro I feel like reading it once and again it's such an amazing piece
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    haha, Wow, that's a nice one
  • Boygene 9 years ago
    Meeeeen!! This is hot than fire. Big ups!!!!!
  • Dan 9 years ago
    Wow mahn, interesting piece, waiting for Sue's response<br />
  • Jay 9 years ago
    Beautiful read right there
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    hahaha....nice
  • Iyan 9 years ago
    dope.......pure talent mehn!!!
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    Nice piece good work
  • Karen 9 years ago
    Niiice...interestingly awesome
  • Francis Muhalya 9 years ago
    That's a nice one guy. Tell us what happened after you talked to her about the other pregnancy! Can't wait to hear. Lol!
  • Constant Ocholla 9 years ago
    Interesting,,,big up
  • Lavenda 9 years ago
    nice choice of words... one has to follow the words keenly
  • Eunice Atieno 9 years ago
    awesome write more dia. this is really interesting
  • Kimaru 9 years ago
    Awesome piece. Everything in this poem is just awesome. I have read it thrice and am thinking of reading it the fourth time. Excellent work
  • Kimaru 9 years ago
    Awesome piece. Everything in this poem is just awesome. I have read it thrice and am thinking of reading it the fourth time. Excellent work
  • Winnie Esther Mosongo 9 years ago
    I like the fact that you brought out the idea of the husband also having the 'yielding' problem yet the society always blames the woman. And whoa! what we do for brotherhood/family. Great piece...I love it Raps...keep writing :-)
  • Okumu 9 years ago
    so amazing bradhe big up soo empowering...
  • Rapando Jnr 9 years ago
    Haha thanks guys. Much appreciated. I can't promise a sequel, but I will try. Thanks for the support and keep visiting for more pieces by other poets too
  • Okeyo 9 years ago
    So interesting<br />You will now have another secret to keep
  • Okeyo 9 years ago
    So interesting<br />You will now have another secret to keep
  • Tina 9 years ago
    Interesting and waiting Sues response
  • Whitney 9 years ago
    Awesome piece Raps,,,I Love it.