Into Oblivion

by Cynthy 9 years ago 👁 980 views ❤ 92
The night is silent,
The moon illuminates my path,
Seth called me tonight,
He wanted us to meet,
At our usual spot,
He sounded solemn though,
like in a sombre mood,
It shouldn't worry me right?


I find him pacing around,
He looks perfect,
Just like always,
but he is nervous..I know,
The look he gives me,
That is not my Seth,
My charming,ever smiling love,
Several thoughts run through my mind.
It can't be that bad right?


I can't help this,
So I decide to question him,
"Seth,Love what is wrong?"
He looks at me without
uttering any word.
Drops an envelop and
starts walking away,
I watch his retreating figure,
Too shocked to reach out,
As he walks into the,
Dark,looming night,
I wish I knew,
That would be my last time,
The last moment I would see him.
Is it wrong that I can't bring myself to see the contents of the envelop?

C
I could write about you... But you don't deserve to live forever... .<br />Anonymous

Comments (22)

  • Jack 9 years ago
    I don't know what to think. Is there a part 2 coz the suspense is killing me
  • Cynthy 9 years ago
    Jack..haha.. I will think of a part 2 maybe
  • Hillary 9 years ago
    Awesome piece ......I wish I could read that part two
  • Nick 9 years ago
    Am impressed baby girl..you so nice
  • Brayo 9 years ago
    What a nice piece. Suspense though
  • Faubert Lagat 9 years ago
    Good work babygirl.I like your creativity.keep the candle lighting.
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    Awesome poem...waiting for part two
  • Tivan 9 years ago
    Nice piece sweetheart
  • Tivan 9 years ago
    Nice piece sweetheart
  • Loice Jepkosgei Rono 9 years ago
    You so creative sweetie...how about part two it left me in suspense
  • Kigen Hazard 9 years ago
    Dope stuff PIC
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    That piece is awesome.i love it
  • Hezzy 9 years ago
    Great one part two please contents of envelope #suspence
  • Hezzy 9 years ago
    Great one part two please contents of envelope #suspence
  • Hezzy 9 years ago
    Great one part two please contents of envelope #suspence
  • Collins Hope 9 years ago
    Wow! Cynthy, the poem is extremely interesting.
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Great suspense. Totally carried away. Thumbs up Cynthy
  • Sharnkid 9 years ago
    Awesome! Proud of you gal... Might as well do us the favour of part two real soon
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Cynthy I love it ... this is awsome
  • Msau 9 years ago
    Nice poem
  • Cynthy 9 years ago
    Thanks y'all appreciate the comments,.suspense ..too much huh..
  • Lucy 9 years ago
    Can't wait to read part 2, goodwork