I Miss The Village

by kechi kenyatta / expired giant 9 years ago 👁 10,361 views ❤ 94
I miss the village
Where children play naked and there is no big deal
Where children are sent to fetch water from the river
Where children play with polythene papers wrapped together in the name of a ball
The village in which everybody is ones friend

I miss the village
The village in which people borrow each other everything
Yeah everything inclusive of the common salt
The village in which there is only one television in the area
Where people crowd in the place as if it is a common room

I miss the village
The village in which there are quarrels each new dawn
But at dusk those who quarrels meet and laugh together again
The village in which disputes are settled by the village elders
The village in which there is shading of blood to appease the dead

I miss the village
The village in which at dusk children surround the grandparents
The village in which fire is lit at dusk
Yeah at dusk to commence story telling
The village in which children sleep with there grandparents

I miss the village
Where village elders are the priests
The village in which there are no churches but shrines
Lastly I miss the village life where sharing of clothes was a norm
I miss walking to school barefooted
I miss communicating in my mother tongue

Now I'm in town where children are always in diapers
In town where children play with toys
In town where each person sees the other as a stranger
I'm in a place where children are driven to school

I'm in town where grandparents no Longer exists
A place where water is available in the house
A place where there are no rivers to fetch waters
A place where there are no good neighbours at all
A place where each new person is another's worst enemy

I'm in town where there are no cattles to graze
A place where no food is grown but bought
A place where you can't have anything unless you have money
I miss the village and it's all environment

Comments (37)

  • Obuntu Oduor Clinton 9 years ago
    nyc piece of work... keep it moving
  • Otaalo John 9 years ago
    Great piece my fellow learning friend.
  • Haron Morrison 9 years ago
    A masterpiece of both super skill and pure passion.
  • Charloo 9 years ago
    gudi one and a u in village..
  • Agatha.n.mumbo 9 years ago
    Lovely Kechi...thumbs up
  • Rapando Jnr 9 years ago
    Hey, I miss the village too. Awesomw expression up therw
  • Perez 9 years ago
    What a talent?! Keep it up Kechi.
  • Perez 9 years ago
    What a talent?! Keep it up Kechi.
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks guys for finding time to pass by I'm humbled
  • Vivian 9 years ago
    Awesome kechi....keep it up
  • Eliud Korir 9 years ago
    Nice one bro...keep the passion going,I like it
  • Eliud Korir 9 years ago
    Nice one bro...keep the passion going,I like it
  • Sylvia 9 years ago
    Wow!!!.. Kudos pal<br />Miss the village too... Keep the fire burning
  • Hillary 9 years ago
    That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
  • Hillary 9 years ago
    That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
  • Hillary 9 years ago
    That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks guys I'm humbled and thanks for passing by
  • Anonymus 9 years ago
    Keep the fire burning buddy.......... Great piece indeed......... I really miss the village..... <br />
  • Norbert Ochola 9 years ago
    Great indeed... I miss the village too... I hate city life where sewage system is wanting
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks for your comments guys
  • Jessa Dinglasa 9 years ago
    That's great kechi...think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy
  • Boygene 9 years ago
    just reminded me of the village life. it used to be awesome
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks boygene and Jessa .dinglasa lemme think and see what makes me happy by considering what is left around
  • Dismas 9 years ago
    Kaboooom i really miss my village
  • Tracy 9 years ago
    the poem is fabulous keep moving
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks Tracy for passing by
  • LUMALA 9 years ago
    Awesome bro , chinua Achebe started this way , a name will be forgotten but writings won't .
  • LUMALA 9 years ago
    Awesome bro , chinua Achebe started this way , a name will be forgotten but writings won't .
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Ooooh my thanks pro.lumala
  • Dopeboy 9 years ago
    miss those days too#great work kechi#
  • Brian Wanga 9 years ago
    Bro, woow!!!, you've got talent aisee, nice piece of art
  • Jeymoh Spotter 9 years ago
    Huh! You miss the village? Am already in the village and things are just a mess here,,,,a cow to graze,,,,,,,haha,,,great work Mr Poet,,
  • Jeymoh Spotter 9 years ago
    Huh! You miss the village? Am already in the village and things are just a mess here,,,,a cow to graze,,,,,,,haha,,,great work Mr Poet,,
  • Artmania 9 years ago
    nice one Kechi
  • Omari.. 9 years ago
    Village HOla.... haha nyc bro
  • Kechi 9 years ago
    Thanks for your comments guys I'm humbled
  • Mercy Mulama 9 years ago
    Keep up the good work