Five Words
Five Words
By Early Bird Poetry Challenge
Sat 01 Jul, 2017 11:38:33 EAT
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Five Words
Hushh....
silence....
respect....
You ask what love is she described it.
When it all seemed difficult she made it easy.
Sadly not for her...
For me.
They look at me they say thank you but they forget to thnk the person who made it all happen
They look at you they see a beast.
I look at you I see my life.
Time wasn't our friend but you made life our bff.
I ain't got no word....
I respect you.
You were alone but u gave me a multitude....
five words.....
I OWE IT TO YOU
By Belinda Rotich
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Tichiejoy
Bella's piece is amazing...I love it
354 wk ago
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Victoria Kyalo
That's a lovely poem Bella. Keep it up !!
354 wk ago
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Francisca Mwori
Awesome Rotich
354 wk ago
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Moses Koome
Its a good work Keep learning new things
354 wk ago
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Millicent Oduoreh
Belinda this poem is awesome... I just liked it... Congrats
354 wk ago
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Maiga Susan
wonderful bella
354 wk ago
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Norman Kipru
wow.... Bella you describe mom's sacrifice so well... i like it... no actually i love it.
354 wk ago
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Linda Ogango
Belinda this is awesome........ keep writing
354 wk ago
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Immaculate
Wow! From ur poem I can see the basis of love.. The motherly love. Thumbs up girl.
354 wk ago
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Junie Samoey
Bella you are awesome
354 wk ago
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Davis Okioma
So smart and creative of you Belinda. Thumbs up.
354 wk ago
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Oscar Rotich
nice one
354 wk ago
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Sammy
Wow it's cool, I love it
354 wk ago
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Kennethcaleb
Wow...Bella,amazing stuff!!!I mean I literally can't come up with even one line yet you are able to do all this...it's just incredible...at a loss of words...make sure your mom reads this piece!!!
354 wk ago
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Irene Chesire
I love it angel Belinda.. you rocked it again!!love u to the bit!
353 wk ago