First Stage Of Grief


Creative Hadassah

First Stage Of Grief

By Creative Hadassah

Wed 08 Feb, 2017 17:21:16 EAT
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#rejection  #love  #grief  


First Stage Of Grief

Wrap your arms around me
Hold me oh so tenderly that I might die
Caress my ears with whispers
Nibble my beautiful long African neck
My love
Your embrace is hotter,forget about an erupt virgin volcano
Swirl me around
Again...

Anyango and Nanjala are dying of jealous
They are ashamed of the coldness
From their so called lovers
They wish
They long for...
Look at Nanjala(what a piteous sight)
Eyes red and puffy from smoke and insomnia
Her brain fermenting like the powerful concoction
Her body no longer tight
Like mine...

Touch my lips
This physical perfection is all yours
Drink from my youthfulness Omwami
When Oduor sees you
He will know
He will wish
Come closer son-in-law of my father
Hero of the Wanga........

Aaaarg,again!
Uncountable moons gone
Yet the first stage of grief still grips my heart
Whence did my lover go?
I hear Wamakuyu is generously preaching
Of how I'm worse than an emaciated cow suffering from diarrhea
I don't care...
Beauty lies in hands of the beer holder
And this bottle of rum from his mother-in-law is ENOUGH...
Hiccup...

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  • Hadassah
    Guys,kindly read and comment..all sorts of criticism is welcome.It's my first time here.
    227 wk ago
  • Chris
    I'd say that the piece is awesome
    227 wk ago
  • Mophat
    What a piece! Beer lies in the hands of the beholder, exactly.
    227 wk ago
  • Damaris Tsisika
    This piece is awesome..perfect
    227 wk ago
  • Jackieynjoroge
    Super nice
    227 wk ago
  • Jackieynjoroge
    Super nice
    227 wk ago
  • Patrick Okeyo
    What a splendid piece of art! I'm elated with you! Be consistent for the secret of success is consistency of purpose! The more and more frequent you write the faster you shall gain excellence!
    227 wk ago
  • Moses
    Awesome piece of poem...
    227 wk ago
  • Joan
    Perfect piece. love it
    227 wk ago
  • Hadassah
    Thank you dear ones..
    227 wk ago
  • Immaq
    A nice piece dear...The message is for the soul...but title na poem!!!grief na yearning and the feeling of being loved are contrast
    227 wk ago
  • Byron
    Fantastic immaq that's the definition of poetry
    227 wk ago
  • Hadassah
    Hehe...Byron,what's ua understanding of the poem
    227 wk ago
  • Ulumah
    This aint off key.. kudos!
    227 wk ago
  • Abubakar
    You have what it takes to be among the best.. .keep it up
    225 wk ago
  • Abubakar
    You have what it takes to be among the best.. .keep it up
    225 wk ago
  • Hadassah
    @Abu,thanks.
    225 wk ago

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