Cookie For Sale

by Eunny 9 years ago 👁 1,014 views ❤ 92
This woman,
Lives next to my house.
Endowed and beautiful,
Fine everything,
But makes me want to send my kids to their grandmother,
Because am afraid they'll heed to her words.

This woman next door,
I no longer know her face.
Visitors flock in day in day out,
Carrying nothing with them
But cheap bottled water.
And when they come out,
I think they pour the water on their bodies,
Because the bottles come out empty,
while their bodies are drenched.

My brother,
The visitors don't come in packs,
They come one after another.
Sometimes I tend to think they're men of God,
Because soon after they enter,
This woman continually says 'Yes' and 'Amen'.
But again,
Do men of God require closed doors for miracles to happen?
And at least they carry Bibles with them.

Another thing brother,
The carpenter hasn't been paid for three months.
He's a regular visitor too,
Comes every Saturday morning,
Only difference is that he carries his tools,
And after a series of hammering and nailing,
He packs and goes.
The other day I heard him complain,
He won't accept this woman's form of payment.
He wants money.

Brother,
Maybe its time you replaced wood with metal,
Maybe then your bed won't break every week,
Or maybe rationing of food will help.
Because until she changes her ways,
I won't call her by her name.
E
Let's tell the stories our way. Let them have it their way.

Comments (28)

  • Kechi 9 years ago
    I love it Eunny
  • Nel 9 years ago
    Not the cookie i thought. :-D Nice one Eunny.
  • Godiah Rocky Imbukuleh 9 years ago
    Such sights are commonplace in tenements and shanty towns where beauties are bitches. Nice flow.
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Kechi. @Nel..what did you think?? :-) Thanks Godiah
  • Nani 9 years ago
    Wow! I'm so thrilled.. What a plot brother! This form of payment, Is amusing.
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Nani.
  • Gordon 9 years ago
    Wonderful... Replace wood with metal
  • Kelvin 9 years ago
    Brilliant, super wordplay.
  • Irene 9 years ago
    Hehehee...metal will do. Nice one gal
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thank you all.
  • Caro 9 years ago
    Brilliant.u r a true poet
  • Gayle 9 years ago
    This so good of you Swthrt....ad prefer the metal one... The kind of payments thou... Go on girl..you got wat it takes to b a poet..u r an epitome of beauty n brains....all the best darl
  • Gayle 9 years ago
    Ad wsh to see them pour water on their bodies coming out wth empty bottles...haha
  • Gayle 9 years ago
    Ad wsh to see them pour water on their bodies coming out wth empty bottles...haha
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Caro. Thanks Gayle.
  • Artmania 9 years ago
    Haha ... that's a nice one
  • Luma 9 years ago
    ...after a series of hammering and nailing... this carpenter is controversial. Splendid word Eunny
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Luma. Thanks Artmania.
  • Mwanda 9 years ago
    Nice work..I love what you do
  • Cynthy 9 years ago
    Awesome piece Eunny...its in a kind of a twisted way
  • Adamoh 9 years ago
    Its unique in that it leaves you completely aware and unaware. Beautiful piece.
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Cynthy. Thanks Adamoh.
  • Lewis 9 years ago
    He wont accept this womans form of payment...thats a master
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Lewis.
  • Wilson 9 years ago
    Prefer the metal too, material aspect, carpenter sorted, no complaining customers just yes and amen haha. Creative piece there. Keep up Eunniah, the sun is the limit
  • Eunny 9 years ago
    Thanks Wilson...haha
  • Engineeralvin.wordpress.com 9 years ago
    Nice piece there Eunny
  • Nkoy 9 years ago
    Good one Euniah