Broken Pieces

by Cynthy 9 years ago 👁 929 views ❤ 96
As I stand against the window shield staring into the raindrops,
Searching for quantum of solace,
My thoughts run back.

That day by the horizon,
I thought I was the best,
The one you chose out of the rest,
I had no reason to doubt you.

Now..I feel I was so stupid,
As I wallow in sorrow at the patio,
I watch you look at me with those piercing eyes,
Full of hatred and disgust,
Was I wrong to love? To fall too hard?

I dwelled in a castle of glass,
One crack had it crumbling down,
Down it went with my heart,
The pieces are a puzzle I don't wish to solve.

Deep in thoughts,
I look up and my eyes meet his,
And for a moment that lingers tirelessly,
Finally,the gale swept away my sorrow,
Am nestling my
faith on it,
Maybe... just maybe life has more in store for me.
C
I could write about you... But you don't deserve to live forever... .<br />Anonymous

Comments (16)

  • Jack 9 years ago
    I love this... The depth is dark but satisfying. I'm impressed
  • Kigen 9 years ago
    Absolutely amazing....I love it....
  • Sotiem 9 years ago
    Absolutely amazin
  • Elcy Tazz 9 years ago
    Awesome... the poem just adds up to something.. completely amazing. I love it to bits
  • Rubbie 9 years ago
    Aaaaaw so sweet indeed girl...rate 10/10 ...
  • Rubbie 9 years ago
    Aaaaaw so sweet indeed girl...rate 10/10 ...
  • Victoria 9 years ago
    Wow.Really nice piece
  • Shillah 9 years ago
    real awesome........
  • Shillah 9 years ago
    real awesome........
  • Kevin 9 years ago
    did i mention .........you just hit the guru mark.........thats a dope.....real real good....
  • Sharnkid 9 years ago
    Talent, skill, passion that's what I see right there.Amazing work there girl
  • Hillary 9 years ago
    Mmmh nice work.....thumbs up ...keep that passion
  • Charlotte 9 years ago
    Thanks y'all
  • Colin 9 years ago
    nice piece<br />...love it
  • Charlotte 9 years ago
    well said Edward
  • Nickdy 9 years ago
    Nice skills