True Love
True Love
I have walked through storm and placid,
Through sun and rain,
To find the equation of true love
Without success,
I stand here pondering,
Wondering if any victim may know
She walks on me,
And take a profound look into my eyes
She mumbles at last,
Love is beautiful,
It's comparable to blossoming roses,
Or drizzling drops in the sun's vicinity
My psyche rebels,
'Cause I know flowers wither with time,
And the drops surmount the sun.
That's not true love
He descries her charms as the true love,
As the solved equation of it.
She unpretentiously goes astray,
Opening her heart wide to his looks,
And size of his trousers' pocket.
They pledge to die out in eternity,
But single out in soonish,
Because their looks fade away with days,
And his pocket size diminishes unnotably.
That's not true love
I stand on the bank and see the river flow,
It flows down the valley without haste,
But still overcomes the stumbling blocks on its way.
I cast my eyes in the north and see a mountain,
Standing sturdily and firmly,
Not swayed by the stormy currents,
Nor moved by the raging quakes,
It overlives the parching sun rays.
That's what I equate to true love,
Patience and perseverance.
©chris
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Eunny
I love the way you've painted how its hard to find true love. Bingo.
372 wk ago
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Chris
Thanks Eunny, its actually very difficult to come by true love
372 wk ago
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William
BINGO
372 wk ago
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Adala Simon
Hahahaa kaka poetry ngumu BT I thnk it s about love cool
372 wk ago
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Willis Ochieng
Top notch creativity.Thumbs up bro!...I never saw it coming.
372 wk ago
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Chris
thanks guys
372 wk ago
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Ochimercie
Thumbs up Chris...I like the way you've put it.It's rare to find true love nowadays and actually many people are always after money
372 wk ago
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Chris
some are blinded by external looks
372 wk ago
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Kibet
Wewee...nice bro.
372 wk ago
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Chris
thanks Kechi, umeshtuka lakini sijui mbona
372 wk ago
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Chris
thanks Kechi, umeshtuka lakini sijui mbona
372 wk ago
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Dianne
Uko sawa my d.a
372 wk ago
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Dianne
huh?I just loved it uko sawa my d.a
372 wk ago
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Soo
This is awesome pal....
372 wk ago
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Chris
Thanks Lorna, I see you have turned up. any criticism ?
372 wk ago
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Chris
thanks Diane
372 wk ago
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Zachary Mbara
big up *chris* nice poem, love such
372 wk ago
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Chris
thanks Mbara, I see you have paid a visit today
372 wk ago
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Victor
good work bro, big up, you are an orator in the making, i love this peace!
371 wk ago
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Chris
Thanks vic
371 wk ago
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Chris
Thanks vic
371 wk ago
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James Muoki
chris soar higher bro .doing it perfectly
371 wk ago
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Chris
Thanks James
371 wk ago